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Here I am a girl
A girl of little years
One seen small of the world
Many drastic fears
There was a day
Where I believed
I could live without a care
Fall in love
With whoever was there
Instead, my only love
Came from my hate
At my dress up party
A love blossomed within our eyes
Something more beautiful
Than you could see
Romeo, Romeo he was my all
But never the less,
His name made us fall
But in my eyes he was the best
What fate hath brought
Us to our doom?
Maybe it was wrong of us to assume
It probably hath been far too soon
Romeo as fair as you are,
There is nothing I can do
I've tried every trick
I don't think I can be with you
You were never my enemy
it was in fact your name
If only things were different
Our outcome wouldn't have been the same
I cared nothing for Paris,
It was only my mother and my father
They would not listen to my wish
I said it was you fair Romeo I would rather
When I heard you slain Tybalt
I wanted my nurse to tell me it was a lie
My beloved was at fault
That brought a tear to my eye
Fair Romeo Fair Romeo
What hath done thee?
I wish this was all just a dream
If only I could tell my father
It's not as crazy as led to seem
I took a potion something
Quite strange a lover of death
I froze and lay down still
I looked like I was dead
I waited the long Forty hours
For my Romeo to come
My eyes half open I slowly woke
With my words I nearly choke
There he lay stiller than I
Not moving once or a bit
I wondered how I would like to die
I grabbed a knife
Upon my lovers body I looked
As sad as I felt I pushed it right in
Everything started to blur
I took in one last gasp
I beside my Romeo
As star-crossed lovers we paid
As star-crossed lovers we laid…
I wanted to try writing from a different point of view, it took a while but i finally thought of writing in a female's point of veiw. i'm not too sure people will like it, but i'm open to honest criticism
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AmayaKimikoHime Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It honestly gave me chills. <3
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:iconlawliet-mourningstar:
thanks, i dont really think it's that good though
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AmayaKimikoHime May 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I think it's cute. <3 Good depiction of J&R
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:iconlawliet-mourningstar:
thank you very nuch :)
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AmayaKimikoHime May 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Np :)
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