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I would die for the warmth of her next to me, snuggled so close, so firm; Her hair glowing in the shifting pale light of the tv, teasingly peeking out of the dark like a three-year-old angel playin' peek-a-boo; A smile that eclipses the world, laughter that heals the deepest of wounds, velvet skin, a melting touch:

A woman To die for



Her hair gently tickles my chest, her heavy breath, deep with sleep, caresses.

I dare not move, dare not disturb, not the slightest; if only forever, if only for a moment, my life for her peace.

No words, no sounds, no art; nothing comes close, nothing can touch; no prayer, no God, not even, not ever.

Nothing.





The warmth she gives… She sleeps… I want to squeeze her so hard, I want to squeeze her so close, not close enough, never tight enough; hold her so hard, so tight; so much, so close;

til I know she doesn't hurt, til I know she doesn't ache, til I know she'll always be safe.

til my tears stop.



I dare not disturb a rest so long awaited, a sleep so pure; a warmth so vibrant,

so soft, so fragile. So strong, So much...

A woman, A mind;

my reason to live:

A woman to die for.
:iconmetalheadvince:
like the idea, i simply think that the execution of it was lacking a bit. I know nothing about poetry, other than my experiences as a lyricist so im not sure if you followed anything specific, i just wasn't necessarily a fan but nice attempt! :D
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:iconlawliet-mourningstar:
maybe you should check out my other ones, i can admit that this isn't one of my best but it's only going to give people the wrong impression about me if i only put up goos ones, trying to be completely un-biased towards myself.
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